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i need help with my Magic deck?

I am trying to make difreint types of decks in magic so this time i am trying a 4 color type deck So i made this deck and i know i a not that good at making decks so i am wondering out of the cards iam listing what shud i add and what shuld i take away. I am over 70 cards witch is bad that is why i need help thank you. P.S pease dont be rude with the awnsers i know i am not good. Lands Island (6) Forest (6) Swamp (5) Mountain (6) Piranha Marsh (1) Rootbound Crag (1) Savage Lands (1) Arcane sanctum (1) Terramorphic Expanse (1) Sorcery and Instant negate x1 Quest for the gemblades x1 Gorgon Flail x1 Carapace x1 double negative x1 Flaming Sword x1 Giant Growth x3 Agony Warp x1 Thrive x1 Lightning Bolt x1 Mana Cylix Natures Spiral x1 Naturalize x1 Extra Arms x1 Essence Scatter x1 Nettlevine Blight x1 Terminate x1 Fire Ball x1 Loxodon Warhammer x1 Creatures StreetBreaker Wurm x1 River boa x1 Cudgel Troll x1 Jund Sojournersx1 Kederekt Creeper x1 Rendclaw Trow x1 Greenweaver Druid x1 Wall of Frost x1 Magma Phoenix x1 Borderland Ranger x1 Enormous Baloth x1 Verdant Eidolon x1 Reckless scholar x1 Winged Cotal x2 Acidic Slime x1 Cemetery Gate x1 Deity of Scars x1 Mischievous Quanar x1 Elvish scrapper x1 Coiling Oracle x1 Capricious Efreet x1 Planeswalkers Chandra Nalaar x1 Garruk Wildspeaker x1 Jace Beleren x1 Thanks for the help and comments P.S sorry about my spelling and Grammer

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2. I'm not seeing any focus. What card or cards do you expect to use in conjunction to make it impossible for your opponent to stop you? Firstly, way too many 1-offs. This will make your deck extremely inconsistent. You want a minimum of 3 of any card in your deck; otherwise, you apparently don't care whether you ever draw it, so it should be removed. Secondly, if you are going even 3 colors, you need a selection of multi-color lands like the Alara-block tri-color lands or Panoramas. At 4 colors, you practically need to run 4 of (depending on the deck structure/format) Ancient Ziggurat, Rupture Spire, and/or Reflecting Pool. Again, what is the win condition? I'm not seeing a burn deck, or a mill deck, or a lot of big creatures and mana acceleration, or a load of lifegain, or a load of control. It's just cards thrown together.